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Story:
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Reverse Frontier,a condition where 4 Universe with different timeline, different dimension, and different culture connected via mystical Border called "Cross Gates".
the themes for the Universe are Medieval, Feudal, Steampunk, and Futuristic And from the shadows... a force aiming for destruction of Reverse Frontier begin to move...
12 years ago, Selphie Nate, an ordinary poor girl from ordinary poor family met a mysterious boy and the two became close friend. But soon, the boy had to move to another Universe. And not for a long time, Selphie were sold to a mysterious guy by her parents for some money.
it's revealed that the one who bought Selphie is a weird, closed man who sleep during daytime and "work" in night. and his job is a mystery...
When Selphie is 16, another shocking truth revealed: The man is a vampire, a member of the force which aim for Reverse frontier's destruction and using Selphie as "Soul Container" by turning her into a vampire. helpless, she accepted the bitter truth and continued to live on as a vampire.
and somehow, in one day, an exterminator (those who exterminate demons)raided their place and somehow managed to finish off the old vampire, when Selphie managed to survive. burnt by revenge, she continued to hunt down humans, especially exterminators.
2 years later The nearby villager hired a Bounty Hunter to exterminate the Female Vampire. As he proceed into the castle with his almighty Revolving Blade clearing his path, and faced Selphie. the hunter got the upper hand, at least until the real Vampire, who supposed to be "dead", returned revealing his final plot: taking away Souls Selphie collected and kill her in the same time, as she's useless after all Souls were sucked. the Vampire easily beat Selphie and the Hunter, and began the Soul takeaway ritual. when it's 50% done, The Hunter bravely re-interrupts the ritual....
Chara:
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Schneide Zonvolt Title: Lost Beowulf Age 18 Weapon: Revolver Blade
A pervert wannabe Ladiesman who wanders around as Bounty Hunter,and Selphie's Childhood friend. Always remain calm in almost every situations, and is a master of Devilish plan. One that's haven't realized is his bitter past before met Selphie in their Childhood
Selphie Nate Title: Sealed Ressurection Age 18 Weapon:Lucifer and Gilgamesh
Schneide's childhood friend who's turned into a vampire and a Soul Container. A bit serious and have no mercy to scold Schneide when his pervert side surfaced. Even after sealed, her state as Soul Container remained, as long as she killed a creature, the creature's soul will trapped inside her. This state really irritates her.
Milletia Revniv Title: Destructive Cute Age: 15 Weapon: Built in Dual Plasma Schyte
An amnesiac Android Girl who's found by Schneide and Selphie. She Lost all of her past memory, but seems to hold a grudge with "vampires"
Credits:
wltr3565 LightNightKnight (for assisting and supporting this project)
MechaJunkers Enterbrain
and YOU!
please rate this concept! Look forward for your comments!!
Download Link
Code:
http://www.media*fire.com/?58zby9wmjjv6zg5
(no RTP VX included)
For Full Excitement, don't edit anything unless you found any bug(s) please report upon finding any bug(s)
Battle Manual:
Here's a video on how the battle system works:
and that's all for now. Waiting for your comments!
Terakhir diubah oleh Milan Nacht tanggal 2011-05-23, 21:38, total 20 kali diubah
baru mainin setengah sih, tapi udah keburu pengen komen aku suka bagian 'jurus'nya, jadi rasanya lebih menantang, ga asal klik-klik doang kalo mau berantem. kalo charset, iya rasanya agak kurus kalau menghadap kanan/kiri tapi overall semangat ya
Baru kelar maen, wa nda bisa kalahin boss terlalu imba ~3~, tapi ini beberapa komen wa.
Gameplay = Wa baru ngerasain BSnya aja soalnya blm ada fitur lain, BSnya sendiri sudah ok menurut wa fitur combinya mayan menarik cuman ada baiknya kasi tutorial dulu, sampe sekarang wa cuma bisa pake jurus-jurus biasa aja, yg lainnya nda tahu cara mengaktipkannya. FG juga nda ngerti cara keluarinnya ~3~ - Saran wa, skill dimulai dari kombi 2-3 tombol dulu ntar baru di tambahin perlahan lahan biar nda puyeng.
Lalu soal puzzle, terus terang masih biasa sama kurang menarik, misal pas disuru nyari dragon eye nda jelas disuru kemana, wa keliling-keliling asal baru lawan musuh khusus. Udah selesai dapet semua item, disuru lawan musuh lagi.
- Saran wa untuk puzzle mendingan di bumbui sedikit realisme (agak aneh aja melihat sistem keamanannya aneh kaya begini) Wa mayan demen puzzle yg ada tantangannya kaya WA series.
Lalu lainnya itu Boss battle, terlalu sadis menurut wa, item cuma nyembuhin 120 HP, di serang habis 160 wa langsung KO en bingung mau ngelanjutinnya (agak males cari lvl sih)
Story = Blm bisa wa komen, masih terlalu sedikit kontennya, soal dialog masih butuh perbaikan, tapi dialog jorok khas OG Saga kerasa banget
Graphic = Map masih terlalu besar dan encounternya kebanyaken, untung escapenya lancar terus ~3~. Menurut wa mapnya di kecilin aja sama diperdetail. Animasi monsternya dah bagus, cuma yg kodok mending di edit dikit biar badannya yg goyang tapi kakinya diem, agak aneh ngeliatnya sih. Sprite character agak aneh ngeliatnya dari depan, mukanya keliatan terlalu lebar kalo dari samping sih dah ok.
Music = Music pake OST dari SRW ya? Beberapa dah pas sih. Terus coba suara character pas nyerang di perbanyak, kalo perlu perjurus ada suaranya sendiri biar lebih bervariasi.
Sekian dari saya, kalo ada yg kurang berkenan wa minta maap
settingnya satu tempat; Kastil Vampir... jadi inget Castlevania, tapi lalakonnya bawa pedang
quick review:
1. soal sequence rumit pas casting skill... IMO ngga terlalu sulit bagi ane (secara ane gamer yang suka sama combination buttons, semacem D-DF-F-a1, F-D-DF-a1, dan sebagainya )... cuman butuh pembiasaan saja btw, skill yang pake 'frontier gauge' tu gimana pakenya? FYI: sistem command actor-nya mirip sama yang ane lagi kembangin dan skill-nya semua pake German
2. Animasi sprite beberapa gerakan Schneide dan animasi gerakan Frogon (yang sejenis kodok bangkong) keliatan rada ngegeser dikit... ini yang baru ane liat sampe sekarang oh pas ane coba biar sekarat lalakonnya, ada dikit ganjalan...
SS-nya:
yup... kalo gini keliatannya si kodok yang
3. Map? lumayan rame buat kastil yang ditinggalin... tapi beberapa dekorasi mungkin nambah kesan angker gitu Encounter cukup banyak... lumayan bikin olahraga buat lalakon
4. Storyline?
sugesti pertama ane maen: masuk ke kastil dan buru vampir... tapi ane yakin ini pasti masih intro atawa "teaser" dialog? ane ngga terlalu merhatiin
5. Music? ane cuma nikmatin gameplay-nya aja tapi kesan techno melekat saat battle
sekian dari orang terlanjur ganteng se-RMID kalo ada salah kata mohon maap
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well thanks buat reviewnya .
oh ya, untuk ngaktifin Frontier Gaugenya pencet tombol A (keyboard) (maap lupa ngasi tau). Dalam Demo ini wa kasi semua non partner/mech skill, nanti versi full bakal wa potong abis, tinggal sisain 2-3 skill aja
Trus... yang sprite mata berdarah masangnya dan masih ada yang geser, akan wa perbaiki nanti.
soal map sumpah mumed kk kalo pake Mack mau pasang dekorasi apaan (+ sprite yang jumbo begini). dan puzzle... sori masi jelek, ngebut bikinnya
Boss Battle: di sini mewajibkan leveling sih... tapi apa emang ke IMBA an ya attacknya?
Story... yea, i still sucks in story developing soal dialog "jorok" : my style
anyway, thanks again buat reviewnya. Yang lain? ada pendapat lain? kritik dan saran lain? ditunggu