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[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 16:22
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Kk2 dan cc2 ini salah satu cerita novel saya yang saya janjikan di perkenalan saya. Berhubung udah banyak ceritanya, dan pasti ribet bacanya, saya post prologue-nya aja.

Sorry kalau salah kamar. Soalnya, saya gak tau di mana kamar buat nge-post beginian, dan ini juga bukan buat game.

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Begitulah hehe

Terakhir, Kak TheoAllen, saya dengar dari Ko Sid, ada basement buatan kk kusus buat nge-post konsep, nanti saya ikut ya? hehe

Oke, oke. Dapet sambutan yang cukup hangat, jadi saya post deh yang baru. Ini baru chap 1 sih. Tolong kasih saran ya buat yang satu ini. Makasih kk2 dan cc2

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Begitulah ceritanya :). Moga - moga lebih bagus dibanding prologue-nya. Kalau masih ada yang kurang, tolong dikasih tahu ya :D

Update chapter! XD Ini baru chapter dua XD Mudah - mudahan gak bosen bacanya :) Sekali lagi, minta saran dan kritik ya

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XD Sorry kalau gak begitu bagus ya :hammer: Yah, menurut saya juga masih ada yang kurang, tapi cuma perasaan saya mungkin? Sebelumnya udah banyak dikritik Nisa XD, jadi khawatir juga udah bagus ato belom :hammer: Please comment! :)


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Terakhir, Kak TheoAllen, saya dengar dari Ko Sid, ada basement buatan kk kusus buat nge-post konsep, nanti saya ikut ya? hehe
=)) =))
Monggo2 boleh aja :kabur:
kalo mau bantu gw nyari ide buat project gw juga :kabur:
ane ampir ngira kalo itu Vario =))

btw....
belum baca prolognya sih :kabur:
dan post ane ini bukan OOT. :kabur:
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yo welcome silver,taruh sini aja gpp.
Ntar dibkin VN aja,biar sid yg gambarin CG. Mehehehe
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 16:44
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Looking forward to it
I'm being bored to search any VN
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 17:24
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Boleh dicoba nih VN pakai bahasa Indonesia :D
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 17:34
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saya juga ikutan bingung
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Sang gadis mulai bingung dengan apa yang dikatakan sang gadis cilik.

walo cuman berdua, sempet kelabakan walau ada embel2 "cilik" nya..
kalo nama salah satunya di deklarasikan terlebih dulu ato konsisten pake sebutan pengganti "gadis cilik" itu penyihir kyknya gk terlalu bingung bacanya
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 17:38
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Iya, kepikiran buat ganti namanya, tapi belum diganti - ganti juga. Saya juga sempet bingung kok
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Wah kaco =))

Ganti aja jadi "Wanita dan Gadis", jangan "Gadis dan Gadis Cilik" :v
Terus ganti umurnya jadi 20an, umur 16an belum saatnya mikirin nikah kawin :hammer:


Dasar cewe2 jaman sekarang pengennya kawin muda terus nih :kabur: =))
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Hmm... Lumayan sih.. Ini mungkin bakal keren kalo jadi cerita suspense. Tapi, yang ditekankan di sini itu Magic dan Fantasynya ya? Hmm.. :hmm:

OOT : Baru nyadar. Tante Argentum adalah adiknya om Sid...Waw.... :sembah:
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 18:04
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kalo baca ceritanya, ini jadi semacem dongeng di dunia dalam cerita itu ye?
jadi ada kemungkinan tokoh utamanya bukan si gadis ataupun gadis cilik :hmm: (the hell, makin kesel gwa sama ginian).

ini bukan buat game?
trus buat apa?
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WTH just lumayan ?! :FU:
this is AWESOME !!!! :FU:
Love teh gaya menceritakannya ~ :cry: well, ada typo n pengulangan kalimat sih :ngacay2:
Bring back memories :cry:

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really LIKE it ~ :cry:
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Bukan, char utamanya tuh si penyihir (Haou), dan familiarnya (Suou) :v

superkudit wrote:
ini bukan buat game?
trus buat apa?
Novel nyuk :hammer: (baca atuh :hammer:)
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Umm... ada situs bagus kalo buat ngepos beginian.
Coba post di kemudian.com , biar dapet masukan-masukan yang bagus. ;)
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-08, 22:01
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Wah Cerita Bagus
Cocok buat Dongeng Sebelum tidur...
Ok juga, tp klo m d jadiin Crita RPG rasanya kurang cocok, Tp klo di akal2 in n d tmbah bbrpa elemen2 dsana, akan mnjadi cerita yg menarik untuk diikuti..

So Ttp brkarya kawan :thumbup:
[Novel] The Witch's Diary Empty2012-02-11, 17:57
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Makasih masukannya ya. Nanti diperbaiki deh. Mudah - mudahan tambah bagus
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Pardon me . . . .
Mind if I use this story, please? :twisted:
Well, klo emang ini free to use mungkin seharusny brada di sector resource.... :hmm:
If you got more story, please share it to me only ~
I would like read more of kind like this ~ :ngacay2:
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Wah, bingung juga kalau ditanya gitu.
Tapi, kalau dibilang story-nya punya saya sih, kagak apa - apa deh :)
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Singkatnya kasih credits :v

Tapi kalo kata gwa sih mending jangan :hammer:
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Setelah dibicarakan dan didiskusikan, kayaknya emang jangan deh. Sorry ya
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baru Prologue yak :hmm:

oke, ane masih penasaran apa yang terjadi selanjutna setelah kontrak :hmm: btw, yang pertama ane tangkep dari cerita ini suasananya kalo ngga fairy tales, ya Gothic

btw terusin yak :v
pengen baca lagi :ngacay2:

tambahan: kali2 kopdar lah.. jadi bisa share ide secara langsung gitu :D
*kopdar = kopi darat, alias ketemuan :kabur:

//me kabur sebelum kakaknya dateng :kabur:
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New chapter update! Mohon kritik dan sarannya ya
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cuman mo memastikan..
ini settingnya kayak di dunia jaman sekarang ya?
kayak bumi tahun 2000-an

TQ
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Tergantung. Setting-nya bisa saya ubah - ubah sesuai cerita dan keinginan
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maksudnya?
parallel universe gitu?

maksudku setting dunianya ini kyk gimana?
world concept gitu lho..

takutnya apa yg di visualisasikan sama otak pembaca, sama maksud isi cerita itu bentrok nanti
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Kalau gitu, bener. Iya, ini setting-nya tahun 2000-an gitu
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