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| The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire | |
| 2013-12-20, 15:40 | The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| Ya'allah.. berat banget cobaan yang engkau berikan kepada hambamu ini. Di kala presentasi 20% selesai, engkau mengambil semua balance kami untuk menyelesaikan proyek ini. Hal ini terjadi pada tanggal 20 Februari - 15 Maret yang mengakibatkan proyek ini tersendat dan kami harus mencari modal terlebih dahulu untuk melanjutkan proyek tersebut. Huft,,, Get Me Strong... Updatetan lama.- Spoiler:
Mau update apa ya? la wong gamenya kalau dijelasin tu banyak banget dan susah. apalagi kalau pakai bahasa inggris. Sangat dan sangat susah. Btw, untuk kali ini, update gak usah ditulis disini ya. tunggu demo gamenya jadi, langsung main dan komen gitu aja ya. heheheheh. Mungkin penjelasan gamenya kalau dibikin 1 buku bisa. jadi nanti, mungkin aku akan upload file berupa pdf atau semacamnya yang bisa anda baca. kalau ditulis disini, kebanyakan. dan kasihan database forum ini, nanti penuh. So, wait aja ya. bentar lagi demonya release kok. tenang aja. sabar ya.. heheheheh the Old one.- Spoiler:
Hay guys, now, i will share Blue Print of my first Project ! But, in this Blue Print just containing Synopsis, Village, Character, and Features. Everthing in this post has not been completed. and sorry, no SS (Screenshoot) for this time. The name of game that will be Release as soon as possible is " The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire". Why i pick that title ? Because our Hero in this game have a Great Desire to make the water Free. Because, in this story, Water is not Free. we must buy the water to the Kingdom Weaver. And the price is expensive. Listen for the Synopsis : Synopsis : - Spoiler:
Water ? Where the water ? why my village and other village did not have water ? Why we must buy the water ?
Is not the water is a gift from the creator that should be free? I must find the way to make water free !
Our hero woke from his sleep. he ask to himself "Why i always dream about that ?". Then, Annie, Mother of our hero call him to fulfilled the chores that the father gave to him. The father Chief. trunk is waiting in the Meting room. Our hero is a child of the Chief of the Crown Village. he is just a regular kid. nothing special on our hero. After the hero see the father, he have the chores form him. The chores is to buy 5 barrel water in South East Water Gate. The price of 1 barrel full of water is 1.000 Artho (Artho is the name of money in this story) so the father gave to our hero 5.000 Artho. And then, our hero go to the Water Gate to buy the Water. But, When he got there, the price of the water is rose to 1250 Artho @barrel. So, our hero order 4 barrel. When workers prepare the water that ordered by our hero, suddenly crossed his mind that "the water was supposed to be free?". and finally, he does not buy water. After that, he go home ! when our hero arriving home, our hero went straight to his father. However, his father scolded instead turned our hero. Because, he did not fulfill his father's request. our hero tries to explain what he knew about the situation. However, the father still berating our hero. the night come, and our hero still thinking about "the water was supposed to be free?". Can our hero make the water free ?
Character :- Spoiler:
{Our Hero} Playable :Blazt Redo kun Sanghe Grady Korona Mark Sach Chief. Kyo El De Bra Krin Max Hebr Dwarvymus non playable :Chief. Trunk Annie Shop :Chandler Grib Hugine Journey Guider :Alethea Mystery man Village : - Spoiler:
Crown Village Shimpay Village
Features : - Spoiler:
- Inn
- Treasure Hunter
- Blacksmith : Weapon Shop, Crafting, Suffix, Upgrade
- Item Shop
An explanation of the features : Inn : You can Rest and Save your game. If you rest in here, your HP & MP of all party member will be recover 100% and the save dialog will be pop-up.. If you just save it, the HP & MP is not recovered. Treasure Hunter : Just like the name. You Hunt the treasure in the world map. You just need to find some strange place and bring " Blazt" in your party. Blacksmith : - Weapon Shop : You can buy a weapon in here. just for remember, the weapon it's devided into : Normal Weapon, Magic Weapon, Epic Weapon, Legend Weapon, and Rare Weapon. - Crafting : you can make your own weapon. you just need to find an Acient Scroll. but you must translate the Acient Scroll in the Ordinary Language that is mastering by " Hebr". After That, you will given by " Hebr" the copies from the Acient Scroll bring the Recipes to Blacksmith. - Suffix : Almost like an upgrade. However, you will get different effects of each weapon that you suffix. example: add 5% HP, MP 5%, ATK 5%, adding fire effects when attacking an opponent, etc. - Upgrade : Just add the ATK for weapon, and DEF for Armor, etc for accessories. Item Shop : I think you must be familiar with this. and you know what it is.
Maybe just that for this time.. And this is will be update.. If you want know the progress of this Game Project : is now 12% Complete ! Wait for the demo...
Presentasi demo release adalah 30% dan presentasi dari game yang dikembangkan baru 15%. Jadi, sabar ya. Note : Kesulitan di pembuatan Mapnya. makanya release game demonya lama. soalnya, gonta ganti map mulu. huft..
Terakhir diubah oleh vicky990 tanggal 2014-03-31, 20:26, total 6 kali diubah (Reason for editing : Update) |
| | | 2013-12-20, 15:57 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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DeadAndAlive Newbie
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| Apa replynya musti B.ingg juga? Itu mimpinya aneh banget tiap malem kaya gitu ... Karakternya ga ada penjelasannya sedikit? Cuman untuk perbandingan, Permonster Arthonya dapet berapa, atau Harga loot sekitar berapa? Yah semoga berhasil~ Dan Jangan Kabur ya dari sini, sering sering main kesini (Biar dapet temen) |
| | | 2013-12-20, 16:05 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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shikami Member 1000 Konsep
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| simple story.. i dont know what connection why there's so many characters for really simple story, hmm cant wait for twist of events.. good luck btw |
| | | 2013-12-20, 16:12 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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richter_h Salto Master Hancip RMID
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| flagged for the next update check. sounds nice and neat features, but don't ask me how the story is as my interest is in system, not story. good "luck" with the project btw |
| | | 2013-12-20, 16:34 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| - DeadAndAlive wrote:
- Apa replynya musti B.ingg juga?
Itu mimpinya aneh banget tiap malem kaya gitu ... Karakternya ga ada penjelasannya sedikit? Cuman untuk perbandingan, Permonster Arthonya dapet berapa, atau Harga loot sekitar berapa? Yah semoga berhasil~ Dan Jangan Kabur ya dari sini, sering sering main kesini (Biar dapet temen) pakek bahasa indo juga gpp master... - shikami wrote:
- simple story.. i dont know what connection why there's so many characters for really simple story, hmm cant wait for twist of events..
good luck btw thank you.. - richter_h wrote:
- flagged for the next update check. sounds nice and neat features, but don't ask me how the story is as my interest is in system, not story.
good "luck" with the project btw and what do do you think about the story anyway? ========================= msg from moderator: Posting disatukan. lainkali jangan triple post gini ya.
Terakhir diubah oleh Dezwil tanggal 2013-12-20, 18:32, total 2 kali diubah |
| | | 2013-12-20, 21:55 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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LowlingLife Administrator
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| Why??? Why can't you use proper English grammar & capitalization? Well, this project seems to reflect our country. In Indonesia, it is difficult for villagers in undeveloped regions to get clean water. But, I still don't understand about the water. Water is everywhere. Does water only exist in Weaver Kingdom? Also, I don't understand about the connection between those characters and the story. P.S : Maaf saya sok Inggris. Tapi karena postnya pakai bahasa Inggris, saya juga pakai. |
| | | 2013-12-21, 07:47 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| - LowlingLife wrote:
- Why??? Why can't you use proper English grammar & capitalization? Well, this project seems to reflect our country. In Indonesia, it is difficult for villagers in undeveloped regions to get clean water.
But, I still don't understand about the water. Water is everywhere. Does water only exist in Weaver Kingdom? Also, I don't understand about the connection between those characters and the story.
P.S : Maaf saya sok Inggris. Tapi karena postnya pakai bahasa Inggris, saya juga pakai. Sorry sir, i not put the world in my post. But, you should know that Kingdom Weaver Region is in coastal areas. And as another kingdom, this kingdom create a big wall to split and protected they region. And, they have a Water Gate, Closed another river, Lake and everything that can be water resource. so, water is very hard to find. Only one way we can get the water, ie : We must buy the water. Perhaps more explanation you can see in the demo. Which will be released if the percentage complete reaches 35%. Just too long if it is described here or in the post. |
| | | 2013-12-21, 08:10 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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TheoAllen ♫ RMID Rebel ♫
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| I was thinking what if the rain happens and the people start to collect water from rain drops? Is that illegal? |
| | | 2013-12-21, 08:52 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| - TheoAllen wrote:
- I was thinking what if the rain happens and the people start to collect water from rain drops? Is that illegal?
Rain never drop in this region. because, there are dark magic covered this region. This will be full explain when the hero meet Alethea - The journey Guider. About who has do the dark magic, when, what reason, all will be explain when meet Alethea - The journey Guider. |
| | | 2013-12-21, 21:08 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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Yugi_boy[RPL] Newbie
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| The story is very guud. if in the case, then there aren't plants and what about the soil water? did the people dig into their soil to create sumur or selokan? so they can make potion (potion is made from daun2an, isn't it?) Then what'll be used to be potion? |
| | | 2013-12-22, 10:15 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| Plants ? yes, they are much plants. For make a Sumur ? They will be killed if they do that.. |
| | | 2013-12-22, 21:31 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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Aizaku Newbie
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| Kalo menurut gw ya... Agak kurang realistis kalo misalnya susah cari air... Secara yg namanya air itu sendiri sangat luas... Bisa air susu, air hujan, dan air" lainnya... Saran gw sih napa ga di persempit aja jadi air bersih... Kan gampang tuh bikin cerita yg nyangkut air bersih... Contoh : karena sebuah sihir jahat, semua air yg ada di bumi menjadi tercemar. Namun air bersih berhasil di temukan oleh blablabla... Dan bagi yg menginginkannya harus membayar.. |
| | | 2013-12-22, 21:56 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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DeadAndAlive Newbie
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| @Ai <<Boleh ga make ini aja? Kurasa yang di malsud udah air bersih deh... dan air bersih di jaga ketat sama kerajaan Weaver... Btw, kalau soal "ada sihir yang menahan hujan" Bagusan pemberitahuannya satu game sama seri yang pertama, soalnya nanti player bisa mikir kaya Theo |
| | | 2013-12-23, 08:02 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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TheoAllen ♫ RMID Rebel ♫
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| Well, it seems that the concept itself is already made by the developer. All we need to do is waiting for the release. So, relax and don't ask anything until you played the game yourself after release |
| | | 2013-12-23, 09:06 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| - TheoAllen wrote:
- Well, it seems that the concept itself is already made by the developer. All we need to do is waiting for the release. So, relax and don't ask anything until you played the game yourself after release
Thank you TheoAllen... |
| | | 2013-12-23, 12:54 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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TheoAllen ♫ RMID Rebel ♫
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| @vic: Still, you asked for critiques and advices. So that is not entirely their fault. You should remove those sentence if you think you're enough by yourself. |
| | | 2013-12-28, 09:22 | Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire |
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vicky990 Newbie
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| - TheoAllen wrote:
- @vic: Still, you asked for critiques and advices. So that is not entirely their fault. You should remove those sentence if you think you're enough by yourself.
Okay, i remove it.. |
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