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| [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land | |
| 2011-10-16, 23:03 | [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| hey... and yess i AM a newbie in here (bisa dilihat dari jumlah post disamping) dan salam kenal juga untuk forum ini, hope best for all sebenernya saya memang mencari tempat untuk menaruh konsep yang memang saya dan teman saya rencanakan baru baru ini (baru banget blom ampe seminggu). jadi pas liat forum game design dan konsep ini langsung saya taro semua ide ide saya dari words ke sini mungkin agak kurang lengkap tapi saya berharap untuk kritik dan sarannya agar bisa membuat konsep ini lebih padat dan kompleks saya juga berharap ada beberapa user yang tertarik untuk bergabung dalam proyek ini mohon dimaafkan kalau konsepnya agak "amatir" saya akui saya memang bukan scripter yang handal (malah baru belajar minggu kemaren buat event ><) tapi saya sedikit berbakat dalam pembuatan cerita, karakter, dialog dan pengaturan perkembangan plot hihihi well then.... enjoy!! nama game : Gaia Project: the forsaken land kode produksi : GP engine : RMVX BS: RPG Tankentai SBS 3.3d + ATB 1.1f Kaduki Eng (no ATB system) genre : RPG jenis cerita : Adventure bahasa : English / Inggris synopsis- Spoiler:
Syrene Andros Relia, a descendant of the famous “Andros” family decided to run away from home and took a journey to the forsaken land “Nefastaria” to uncover the secret within her father’s disappearance. She feels that the issue of her father is not just an ordinary incident. So she urges herself to travel alone, hoping to find leads to her father but, Relia is not aware that her journey might end up with something more than just a disappearance, something that should be remained unknown, something that must be keep secret underground, and something that must be sealed for better future. the world, the tales- Spoiler:
Gaia, a world where reality and magic co-exist together, a world where a fairy tale is no longer a tale, a world that once ruled by a great kindom of velder. This kingdom had reached its glory for almost 2000 years. Named after its first creator, Reld velder, the kingdom consecutively controlled by his descendant, it was succeeding to rule most of the planet. For nearly a couple of centuries, the people all over Gaia had been prosperous and over wealth. They never felt of short coming in foods, resources, and all other needs.
Until one day. That faithful day, the kingdom of Velder has fallen. In a day, the great kingdom with 2000 years of history had suddenly destroyed. There are no survivors to be found, there are no traces to be discovered, and no stories that are able to be passed on. The only legacy that remains was the darkness within. Monster, demons, nightmares, and undead were all over the so called the “leftover kingdom”.
Nearly 500 years, human were abandoning that very land, and naming “Nefastaria continent” as a warning for those daredevil who wanted to claim the land. Even so, there are still many fools dare to enter, seeks only death and despair. All of them were done but, until one time, there was a one group has comeback alive from the “forsaken land”. That group not just alive, they also successfully brought many priceless treasures, valuable minerals, and spoils from an extreme rare monster. And they were manage to prove the world not only once, or twice, or neither trice, but ten times of expedition with a very outstanding findings.
And so it began, the human all over the world once again determined themselves to explore the death land of “Nefastaria”. And they were to realize that very land not only filled with danger, but it contained a countless wealth that no one can imagine. Soon the people were to forget the dark history and lustily to claim only for its priceless resources. But they are not aware; there is an unknown within the depth, waiting silently and patiently for fools to set it free. It is not evil nor monster. It is something more. It is something ancient and it is expect for destruction
for rough image the worldthe world, the regions- Spoiler:
The world: Gaia’s regions are divided by the four biggest continents: 1. Continent of Nefastaria Also known as the forsaken land, a land fills with absolute evil that roams the entire continent and priceless wealth at the same time. For many years, humans are trying to exploit its infinite resources; they build strongholds and settlements around the continent to aid and support them in their hunting for the land. Only a few knows that this continent supposedly contains a great secret of the ancient times. 2. Continent of Dragnar Ruled by the kingdom of Hanzendar, this continent are known for its famous monsters, dragon. In Dragnar, dragons are to be treated and bred by people in here. In Hanzendar, they tend to use dragon for two purposes: one for the ride of nation’s dragon knight and another one to be intentionally killed for a test for qualification of becoming the most proud army all over continent, the dragoon. 3. Continent of Allendia A land where magic civilization is a common thing, Allendia has been the most famous for its technology and knowledge of magic. And in this very land, lived also the great family of “Andros” which believes to be the most powerful magic user for every generation. 4. Continent of Dolzen and Canavan archipelago A land where has the most population in Gaia. Humans in Dolzen are proud of their advanced architecture and technology of war armament. They may be weak and have no special talent like the other continent’s people, but they can create the most advanced armors, shields, and swords. They also can build their building and their wall to nearly indestructible. Main character1. Trident EiderniaBackground: An exceptional swordsman from the nation of Hanzendar, a nation well known for its dragoon army, he possesses a massive endurance and super human strength which make him a greater fighter beyond anyone else. Little known information about where he acquires so much power. Trident always keeps his past and his record discreetly, he very dislike people harassing information about him. Now he is held in town of Ballerne and believes to be responsible for the death of an group of researcher which research in nearby ruins. Traits: - Spoiler:
- Brave - Sturdy - Determined - Sacrificing - Astounding - Confident - Calm - Precise - Tongue tied - Insecure - Vengeful - Hates milk
Age: 25 Height: 180 Cm Weight: 75 Kg Occupation: Mercenary Class: Swordsman Change class: Dragon knight / Dragoon Build: Macho Birth day: 20th January Hand: Ambidextrous Battle role: - Spoiler:
- Highest strength - Highest physical defense - Many weapon masteries - Slightly better for magic resistance
Equip: - Sword, Axe, Spear both one handed and two handed Hit: - Marlene, Great battle Miss - Vegetables, milk, loud mouth - Quote :
- How can you say “it was all just a fate?” from which you knew that it was you who pulled the trigger?
2. Leonard “Leon” HildebrandtBackground: A treasure hunter from town of Ballerne, Leon has special interest in shiny things. He become the most wanted man in his town since 15 years old, but until now no one is able to catch this multitalented rogue. He also popular amongst women (so he said), make him more and more narcissi and thirst for fame. In many circumstances, he actually can be very fun and friendly, but his hobby and addiction just doesn’t seem to mix well. - Spoiler:
Traits: - Cunning - Love women - Attractive - Humorist - Friendly - Flexible - Over estimate self - Irresponsible - Flashy - Narcissistic - Materialistic
Age: 21 Height: 175 Cm Weight: 52 Kg Occupation: Mercenary Class: Thief Change class: Treasure hunter / Assassin Build: Average Birth day: 4th April Hand: Dominant right - Spoiler:
Battle role: - Highest Agility - Capable of dual wield - Earns more gold and more spoils - A potential damage dealer
Equip: - Dagger, Sword but no two handed weapon, Bow Hit: - Women, treasures, himself, renowned Miss: - Bankrupt, wasting money - Quote :
- I am amazed; you actually manage to complex the unnecessary thing
3. Syrene Andros ReliaBackground: A fresh graduate mage from Volsesse, a nation where magic resides, Relia decides to take in history major and follows her passion to explore all runes and secret inscription at forsaken land. But as a descendant of Andros family (and the only daughter as well), a famous family of mage in Volsesse, Relia has been given a lot of warning and big no from her mother, she can’t afford Relia to do same mistake as her late father. And so, Relia decides to travel alone, without money, permission nor protection. The only thing she carries is the absolute determination and the stubbornness which run off from her family. Now, the journey is starting for this young blonde girl. No one knows that she may have become a key factor to reveal all truth. - Spoiler:
Traits: - Determined - Sturdy - Brave - Love children - Stubborn - Prideful - Egoistical - Harsh - Hardhearted - Foolhardy
Age: 18 Height: 160 Cm Weight: she verbally threatens for everyone that asks this question Occupation: Mercenary Class: Mage Change class: Arch mage / Sage Build: Slim Birth day: 11th June Hand: Dominant right - Spoiler:
Battle role: - Highest Intelligence - Highest magic resistance - Various magic either for offense and defense - Very devastating to multi targeting
Equip: - Dagger, Staff, tome and spellsword Hit: - Eating, children, precious artifact Miss: - Called “cupcake”, bad guys, irresolute people - Quote :
- If you called me cupcake one more time…. I shall let you taste a tiny bit of my endless wrath
the guardians1. Axner – Fire 2. Ralvhe – Water 3. Zephyr – Wind 4. Audhulma – Ice 5. Shaxfirr – Lightning 6. Terrator – Earth 7. Shuveyn – Holy 8. Geraldier – Darkness the description is under construction Interactive SystemFishing Cooking Crafting Summoning system Job changes system Side quest legend and myth based story (mainly Nordic and Greek) (description and other ideas are under construction) -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------inilah sedikit konsep dari saya, tidak ngapa kan menggunakan bahasa inggris? sekali lagi mohon maaf kalo amatir comments and critics are highly suggested
Terakhir diubah oleh nless_dreamer tanggal 2011-10-21, 07:59, total 4 kali diubah |
| | | 2011-10-16, 23:17 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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Savoxit Si Rambut Perak
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| Posting pertama dah keren.... bahasa inggris lagi jangan lupa bikin trit intro kk ... btw : - Spoiler:
PERTAMAX
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| | | 2011-10-17, 05:45 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| waw 0_o pertamax hha sudah dibkin intro saya, thanks ya commentnya |
| | | 2011-10-17, 10:36 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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minato Novice
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| wah konsepnya keliatan solid walaupun agak klise tapi jalan ceritanya udah terasa natural tinggal gimana realisasinya aja btw di biodatanya syrene, ada tulisan Hit: - Eating children |
| | | 2011-10-17, 10:55 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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Alucard666 Advance
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| Waduh Pke Bahasa inggris Y udah ane komen yg ngrti aja ya.. Fitur cooking nya menarik... Sma Fishing nya tp System fishing nya kya Bof 4 ya.. Biar lbh kren n g gtu2 aja Sip skses deh bwt km |
| | | 2011-10-17, 10:58 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| @minato tuh kan lupa koma ahahahhaa *edited ya memang klise tapi disni yg lebih penting adalah pengukapan legenda kuno yang dilakukan oleh beberapa variasi karakter yang medalam. bagi saya itu fokusnya dan memang sekarang lg bingung nyari scripter yang mau membantu @deadfail12 hahahah kan mau ditaro juga di forum luar untuk cookingnya sudah ada tutorialnya (udah dicoba pula) tinggal ditambahin aja resepnya untuk fishingnya masih belum di utak atik tuh thanks untuk commentnya |
| | | 2011-10-17, 11:13 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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minato Novice
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| bukannya sudah ditentukan battle systemnya segala? perlu scripting untuk apalagi? |
| | | 2011-10-17, 11:24 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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hyperkudit Pahlawan Super
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| wah bau2nya writer jago nih saya jadi sangsi kalo anda pemula walaupun kurang faham bahasa inggris, konsep ini membuat saya membaca setidaknya setengah dari tulisan tersebut.. sukses dan cepat2 direalisasikan.. kelihatannya konsepnya sudah cukup matang soalnya |
| | | 2011-10-17, 12:14 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| @minato kan scriptnya ga cuma buat BS jg tp rencananya ada event dalam battle, terus sistem summoning yg masih diperdebatkan ama teman teman saya, beberapa custom sprite yg ingin ditampilkan dan dialog bar yang mau diubah jadi kyk FF9 jujur saya kurang ngarti tapi kata temen saya itu semua kalau mau dimaksimalin harus di edit scriptnya @superkudit haiahhh sumfah ane newbie, cuma ngarti bikin skenario doang wkowkowkow |
| | | 2011-10-17, 12:15 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nisamerica Living Skeleton
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| GIla, make traits segala... Bener2 profiler nih Sampe2 dominant hand juga dimasukin, ada yang ambidextrous lagi Konsep keren, ga terlalu klise amat, world map lengkap beserta nama2 dan deskripsi continentnya, bahkan sistem yang ada di dunianya pun sudah terlihat solid Ada kritik nih, Englishnya keren, terutama cara penyampaiannya, tapi grammar masih agak "off" di mata gwa Tapi gwa seneng cara berceritanya terutama yang ini - Quote :
- And they were manage to prove the world not only once, or twice, or neither trice, but ten times of expedition with a very outstanding findings.
Lanjutkan, konsep ini keren |
| | | 2011-10-17, 12:24 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| @nisamerica 1000% SETUJU!! gw agak agak idiot di grammar, jujur gw jg sebnernya baru ngarti yg namanya grammar waktu masuk kuliah ahahahahahha bisa lah dibantu ya om nisamerica, biar makin keren deh hihihih hmmm sbenernya itu traits saya ambil dari sistem valkyrie profile di PS1. kan waktu mw ngirim einherjar harus diperbaikin sifatnya dulu. nah saya ambil garis besarnya terus saya taro di words. ternyata sangat berguna untuk membuat karakter saya menjadi jauh lebih hidup |
| | | 2011-10-17, 12:43 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nisamerica Living Skeleton
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| Agh gwa juga ga terlalu jago English, cuma ngesok bacot aja Dan lagi anda lebih tua dari saya, jadi tidak perlu memanggil saya om Wah gwa ga maen VP jaid ga terllau kebayang, tapi bener sih, karena suatu karakter itu memang memiliki sifat yang bermacam2 dan lebihd ari satu |
| | | 2011-10-17, 19:05 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| @nisamerica ahahahaha siappp gan wah padahal itu game RPG masuk top ten RPG terkeren waktu PSX masih jaya any way thanks for your comment. I'd really appreciate that |
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bungatepijalan Moe Princess
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| | | | 2011-10-17, 19:34 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| @bungatepijalan kalau gatel liat grammarnya (which actually i do too) silahkan di perhalus kk dan nanti hasilnya bisa di PM ke saya nanti saya edit dan nama kk ada jadi credit saya memang sedang mencari anggota di sub forum lain, inginya segera membuat threads di team recruitment namun saya lihat sudah banyak tim disana 0_o jdi daripada bingung mending threadsnya ini saja dn yg berminat bis langsung PM untuk lowongannya semuanya masih kosong jika sudah ada minimal 3 atau lebih yang fix atau aktif baru saya mw membuat threads di tim recruitment mohon bantuannya kk sekalian semua thanks untuk commentnya |
| | | 2011-10-17, 21:26 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nisamerica Living Skeleton
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| @Endless Yeah, emang kepengen nyoba sih, tapi jaman gwa ada PSX gwa baru bocah ingusan yang ga jelas senengannya paan, game2 yang milih biasanya adek Sekarang ada emulator, tapi lagi ga napsu maen apa2, emang udah bawaan lebih seneng nontonin orang maen Btw jadi OOT gini Yah pokonya moga sukses terealisasikan dah, kalo butuh bantuan sih tinggal ngomong2 di CB |
| | | 2011-10-17, 22:38 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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Roger Novice
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| terstruktur dan rapi wow wow wow wow (99x)... mantep terutama sinopsisnya ( 4 thumb mode on) |
| | | 2011-10-17, 22:51 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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reality_disorder Newbie
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| hmm menarik... izinkan saya untuk bergabung dengan anda, saya bisa membantu sedikit di bagian script, database, ataupun event... walaupun saya masih sangat pemula, tp saya akan mempelajarinya, karena kita smua tidak akan pernah berhenti untuk belajar. bukan begitu? |
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NachtEinhorn Robot Gedek Galak
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| konsepting IMBA gini ngaku newbie gw yang proyek udah setaun lebih maced aja konsepnya ga seIMBA ini . Setelah baca2, klise RPG kalsik menurut gw masih kental, tapi gpp, something klise is good, kalo bisa ditutupi dengan scene ama gameplay yang ga ngebosenin. Yang udah nyambung ama sinopsis baru Syrene yah? yang lain masih gelap soal grammar... aw man, faq with that bule aja kalo ngomong grammar masi miss miss masa kita miss dikit ga bole? meski lebih preferable kalo grammar nya perfect sih well, keep up za good work !! |
| | | 2011-10-18, 07:01 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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shikami Member 1000 Konsep
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| wah hati-hati kalo bikin profile lengkap gini,kadang dalam implementasinya ga selancar itu... untuk plot,well..saya lebih suka bagian presentasinya ntar di game, kalo masih konsepting bisa berubah-ubah .. but good luck |
| | | 2011-10-18, 10:03 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| @nisamerica hahaha sekali main VP ga akan nyesel deh thanks though @roger makasih gan, i'd very appreciate that @reality_disorder done, just PM me @milan_nascht yup karena secara keseluruhan peran utamanya syrene tapi nanti banyak konflik dan kejutannya (sayangnya saya ga bisa bocorin, hanya anggota aja yg boleh taw hihihi) iya nih grammernya harus diteliti lagi, kan nanti malu kalo di post forum luar gyahahahaha @shikami im very aware of that - Spoiler:
sebenarnya cerita dan karakter ini semua adalah gabungan dari semua cerita fantasy yang terputus putus yang sudah saya buat sejak SMP jadi untuk plot, ya saya benar benar memikirinya beribu ribu kali agar bisa dinikmati oleh para peminat dan oleh saya sendiri (supaya ga ngadet
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| | | 2011-10-18, 10:06 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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shikami Member 1000 Konsep
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| @nless~ga beda jauh lah sama saya,my original project gabungan konsep putus2 dari SD malah wkwk kenyataannya selera saya sekarang sama dulu beda jauh banget |
| | | 2011-10-18, 10:09 | Re: [CONCEPT] Gaia Project: the forsaken land |
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nless_dreamer Newbie
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| aha ternyata kita satu kaum hahahaha jadi kita sudah mengerti kan plot flowing itu sangat penting, karena kalau untuk diri sendiri aja masih aneh gimana mau di publish ke orang orang ada juga malah bikin kita setengah setengah |
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