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| 2011-06-28, 12:49 | Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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Soledad Newbie
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| JYU-OH-SEI Intro: Our Father who is in heaven. Your name be kept holy. Your kingdom come, Your will be done earth as in heaven. Give us today our daily bread. And forgive us our debts as we have forgiven our debtors. And lead us not into temptation but deliver us from the evil one. For Yours is the kingdom and the power and the glory for ever. Amin. - Story:
Grayland and his twin brother Zackery banished to a planet the death penalty, Kilios. After both of their parents were murdered. They both should explore hutam filled with lush plants and man-eating monster. And also those who thirst for blood. Eventually they realize, to live in Kilios they should be "Beast" strong by getting rid of the weak.
Because only the strongest can be Jyu-Oh, The Beast King.
- Character:
Grayland Gruver Male, Human, 14th, The Protagonist. Physical. Gray has blue eyes and gray hair. Short hair. Her skin was white and smooth. Thin lips and sharp nose. His legs were strong and his body a bit thin. Clothing. He wore a thin gray shirt without a collar. With green shorts. And a black belt. A sheath knife on the right side. Somewhat old-fashioned white shoes. Personality. Son of a brave, courageous, and hard-hearted. He always tried to protect his younger brother, Zackary. Always dare to try new things.
Zackary Gruver Male, Human, 14th, The Protagonist Physical. Physically similar to Grey, but she has green eyes. And a little shorter. Clothing. He wore a thin white shirt without a collar. Black shorts with a tear at the bottom. And a black belt. Black shoes. Personality. A spoiled child, timid and whiny. Turned to nature with his brother, he always made the other person.
Third Male, Human, 28th, The Protagonist Physical. His hair was black and long. Slightly brown skin. Her face was sweet. Black eyes and thin lips. He was tall and very strong legs. Clothing. He was wearing a black shirt with the collar up to the limit of his stomach to form V. With black trousers torn at the bottom. And the green belts. Black shoes. Bringing a rifle on his back and two blades on either side. Personality. Cold, and always seemed suspicious. Smart, but sometimes sneaky. His real name, he kept hidden.
Clairyn Female, Human, 13th, The Protagonist Physical. His hair was black and very short. Slightly brown skin. Her face was sweet. Her eyes were black and thin red lips. She was short. Clothing. He was wearing a long shirt to his groin. Brown leather jacket. He also wore a white headband and a large circle earrings. Personality. Firmly against the others, especially men. His heart just melted at Grey. He is very concerned about Grey.
Terinspirasi dari kisah NATSUMI ITSUKI |
| | | 2011-06-28, 14:20 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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bungatepijalan Moe Princess
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| | | | 2011-06-28, 16:40 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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darwoxs Novice
Posts : 100 Thanked : 1 Engine : RMVX Skill : Beginner Type : Artist
| Kutunggu demonya ya |
| | | 2011-06-28, 17:43 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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Soledad Newbie
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| | | | 2011-06-28, 17:57 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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r15n4d1 Veteran
Posts : 1048 Thanked : 4 Engine : RM2k3 Skill : Skilled Type : Event Designer
| wah... harus buka google translator dulu nih konsepnya mantap om btw, masih pada muda ya... yang tua cuma 1 karakter doang 28 tahun tua lanjutkan.. semoga jadi ojek |
| | | 2011-06-28, 18:00 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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NachtEinhorn Robot Gedek Galak
Posts : 1274 Thanked : 9 Engine : Multi-Engine User Skill : Beginner Type : Developer
| ebused itu doa Bapa Kami? dan hubungannya ama cerita apaan? I LoL'd |
| | | 2011-06-28, 20:26 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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KID_VX Senior
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| - Quote :
- Iya, ini di ceritakan pada tahun 2456. Pada saat itu usia pernikahan adalah 15 tahun ke atas.
Karena angka harapan hidup manusia hanya pada umur 40 tahun. perasaan sekarang pun udah banyak yang nikah umur 15 tahun, apalagi di daerah perkampungan angka harapan hidup manusia hanya pada umur 40 tahun , jadi maksudnya kemungkinan besar mati di umur 40 tahun kbawah |
| | | 2011-06-28, 20:35 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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Espada~ Lolicious Driver
Posts : 1296 Thanked : 22 Engine : Multi-Engine User Type : Jack of All Trades
| konsepnya emang membernya pada masi kecil yah... mirip ama jepang di jaman sengoku aja.... tapi pas jaman itu umurnya ampe sekitar 50 tahun btw... ojeknya yang dulu gimana nih...? ~~~ |
| | | 2011-06-28, 20:40 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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bungatepijalan Moe Princess
Posts : 1487 Thanked : 30 Engine : Multi-Engine User Skill : Intermediate Type : Developer
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| | | | 2011-06-28, 21:32 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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maihime Senior
Posts : 677 Thanked : 143 Engine : Multi-Engine User Skill : Very Beginner Type : Artist
| Kk Soledad, cerita dan konsepnya menurutku sudah bagus... Tapi satu saja yang saya bingung dari awal. Perlukah anda menuliskan doa Bapa Kami di sini? |
| | | 2011-06-29, 07:58 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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Soledad Newbie
Posts : 43 Thanked : 2 Engine : Multi-Engine User Skill : Very Beginner Type : Writer
| - r15n4d1 wrote:
- wah... harus buka google translator dulu nih
konsepnya mantap om btw, masih pada muda ya... yang tua cuma 1 karakter doang 28 tahun tua lanjutkan.. semoga jadi ojek emang begitulah, nanti akan lebih dijelaskan waktu jadi game project.. - Milan Nacht wrote:
- ebused
itu doa Bapa Kami?
dan hubungannya ama cerita apaan?
I LoL'd hubungannya adalah, kedua kembaran ini waktu intro sedang berdoa - KID_VX wrote:
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- Quote :
- Iya, ini di ceritakan pada tahun 2456. Pada saat itu usia pernikahan adalah 15 tahun ke atas.
Karena angka harapan hidup manusia hanya pada umur 40 tahun. perasaan sekarang pun udah banyak yang nikah umur 15 tahun, apalagi di daerah perkampungan
angka harapan hidup manusia hanya pada umur 40 tahun , jadi maksudnya kemungkinan besar mati di umur 40 tahun kbawah klo jaman sekarang kan nikah 15 tahun masih diluar hukum, tapi di jaman di wajibkan 15 tahun ke atas sudah menikah iya jadi kemungkinan 40 tahun adalah umur tertua pada jaman itu, intinya gitu. - espada951 wrote:
- konsepnya emang membernya pada masi kecil yah...
mirip ama jepang di jaman sengoku aja.... tapi pas jaman itu umurnya ampe sekitar 50 tahun
btw... ojeknya yang dulu gimana nih...? ~~~ ojek yang mana lupa - bungatepijalan wrote:
- Wait..wait..
Intro nya... doa Bapa Kami
Can you elaborate apa maksdunya dan apa hubungannya? Mungkinkah doa meminta berkat untuk misi besar yg akan dijalankan?
~ Salam Ngacay dari Alissa Liu ~ waktu Intro game, playable character lagi berdoa untuk kedua orangtuanya dan saudaranya mungkin nanti bisa dijelaskan waktu jadi OJEK - maihime wrote:
- Kk Soledad, cerita dan konsepnya menurutku sudah bagus...
Tapi satu saja yang saya bingung dari awal. Perlukah anda menuliskan doa Bapa Kami di sini?
perlu, biar pada tobat |
| | | 2011-06-29, 09:04 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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Espada~ Lolicious Driver
Posts : 1296 Thanked : 22 Engine : Multi-Engine User Type : Jack of All Trades
| - Soledad wrote:
ojek yang mana lupa yang School of fantasy ato jangan jangan malah udah selese ojeknya SoF..? ~~~ |
| | | 2011-06-29, 14:59 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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maihime Senior
Posts : 677 Thanked : 143 Engine : Multi-Engine User Skill : Very Beginner Type : Artist
| Entahlah... Sebenarnya saya kurang senang dengan game yang membawa-bawa doa... Tapi semoga sukses dengan ojek anda! |
| | | 2011-07-07, 20:52 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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W Crazy RMer
Posts : 869 Thanked : 7 Engine : RMVX Skill : Very Beginner
| Emmm... Biar ga termasuk "SARA" doa nya jgn pke doa itu. buat doa sendiri aja kek doa minta rejeki, dsb Tapi gpp sih kalo emg mau begitu, ga da yg ngelarang |
| | | 2011-07-07, 21:25 | Re: Jyu-Oh-Sei |
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Oscar Senior
Posts : 830 Thanked : 13 Engine : RMVX Skill : Beginner Type : Writer
| untuk urusan doa men doa sih gpp asal tidak offensive doanya. Kalo masih sebatas itu sih ga masalah CMIIW, oh ya? buat @TS screenshotnya dong hohoh ... atau artwork artwork gitu |
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