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PostSubyek: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-20, 15:40

Ya'allah.. berat banget cobaan yang engkau berikan kepada hambamu ini. Di kala presentasi 20% selesai, engkau mengambil semua balance kami untuk menyelesaikan proyek ini.

Hal ini terjadi pada tanggal 20 Februari - 15 Maret yang mengakibatkan proyek ini tersendat dan kami harus mencari modal terlebih dahulu untuk melanjutkan proyek tersebut. Huft,,,

Get Me Strong...

Updatetan lama.
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Terakhir diubah oleh vicky990 tanggal 2014-03-31, 20:26, total 6 kali diubah (Reason for editing : Update)
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-20, 15:57

Apa replynya musti B.ingg juga? :hammer: 
Itu mimpinya aneh banget tiap malem kaya gitu :lol: ... Karakternya ga ada penjelasannya sedikit? Cuman untuk perbandingan, Permonster Arthonya dapet berapa, atau Harga loot sekitar berapa?  Yah semoga berhasil~ Dan Jangan Kabur ya dari sini, sering sering main kesini (Biar dapet temen) :D
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-20, 16:05

simple story.. i dont know what connection why there's so many characters for really simple story, hmm cant wait for twist of events..
good luck btw
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-20, 16:12

flagged for the next update check. sounds nice and neat features, but don't ask me how the story is as my interest is in system, not story.
good "luck" with the project btw :tf:
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-20, 16:34

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Apa replynya musti B.ingg juga? :hammer: 
Itu mimpinya aneh banget tiap malem kaya gitu :lol: ... Karakternya ga ada penjelasannya sedikit? Cuman untuk perbandingan, Permonster Arthonya dapet berapa, atau Harga loot sekitar berapa?  Yah semoga berhasil~ Dan Jangan Kabur ya dari sini, sering sering main kesini (Biar dapet temen) :D
pakek bahasa indo juga gpp master...

shikami wrote:
simple story.. i dont know what connection why there's so many characters for really simple story, hmm cant wait for twist of events..
good luck btw
thank you..

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flagged for the next update check. sounds nice and neat features, but don't ask me how the story is as my interest is in system, not story.
good "luck" with the project btw :tf:
and what do do you think about the story anyway?




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Terakhir diubah oleh Dezwil tanggal 2013-12-20, 18:32, total 2 kali diubah
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-20, 21:55

Why??? Why can't you use proper English grammar & capitalization? Well, this project seems to reflect our country. In Indonesia, it is difficult for villagers in undeveloped regions to get clean water.

But, I still don't understand about the water. Water is everywhere. Does water only exist in Weaver Kingdom? Also, I don't understand about the connection between those characters and the story.

P.S : Maaf saya sok Inggris. Tapi karena postnya pakai bahasa Inggris, saya juga pakai.
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-21, 07:47

LowlingLife wrote:
Why??? Why can't you use proper English grammar & capitalization? Well, this project seems to reflect our country. In Indonesia, it is difficult for villagers in undeveloped regions to get clean water.

But, I still don't understand about the water. Water is everywhere. Does water only exist in Weaver Kingdom? Also, I don't understand about the connection between those characters and the story.

P.S : Maaf saya sok Inggris. Tapi karena postnya pakai bahasa Inggris, saya juga pakai.

Sorry sir, i not put the world in my post.

But, you should know that Kingdom Weaver Region is in coastal areas. And as another kingdom, this kingdom create a big wall to split and protected they region.

And, they have a Water Gate, Closed another river, Lake and everything that can be water resource. so, water is very hard to find. Only one way we can get the water, ie : We must buy the water.


Perhaps more explanation you can see in the demo. Which will be released if the percentage complete reaches 35%. Just too long if it is described here or in the post.
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-21, 08:10

I was thinking what if the rain happens and the people start to collect water from rain drops? Is that illegal?
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-21, 08:52

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I was thinking what if the rain happens and the people start to collect water from rain drops? Is that illegal?

Rain never drop in this region. because, there are dark magic covered this region. This will be full explain when the hero meet Alethea - The journey Guider. About who has do the dark magic, when, what reason, all will be explain when meet Alethea - The journey Guider.
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-21, 21:08

The story is very guud. if in the case, then there aren't plants and what about the soil water? did the people dig into their soil to create sumur or selokan? so they can make potion (potion is made from daun2an, isn't it?) Then what'll be used to be potion?
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-22, 10:15

Plants ? yes, they are much plants.
For make a Sumur ? They will be killed if they do that..
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-22, 21:31

Kalo menurut gw ya... Agak kurang realistis kalo misalnya susah cari air... Secara yg namanya air itu sendiri sangat luas... Bisa air susu, air hujan, dan air" lainnya...
Saran gw sih napa ga di persempit aja jadi air bersih... Kan gampang tuh bikin cerita yg nyangkut air bersih... Contoh : karena sebuah sihir jahat, semua air yg ada di bumi menjadi tercemar. Namun air bersih berhasil di temukan oleh blablabla... Dan bagi yg menginginkannya harus membayar..
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-22, 21:56

@Ai <<Boleh ga make ini aja?
Kurasa yang di malsud udah air bersih deh... dan air bersih di jaga ketat sama kerajaan Weaver... Btw, kalau soal "ada sihir yang menahan hujan" Bagusan pemberitahuannya satu game sama seri yang pertama, soalnya nanti player bisa mikir kaya Theo
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-23, 08:02

Well, it seems that the concept itself is already made by the developer. All we need to do is waiting for the release. So, relax and don't ask anything until you played the game yourself after release :)
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TheoAllen wrote:
Well, it seems that the concept itself is already made by the developer. All we need to do is waiting for the release. So, relax and don't ask anything until you played the game yourself after release :)

Thank you TheoAllen...
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-23, 12:54

@vic: Still, you asked for critiques and advices. So that is not entirely their fault. You should remove those sentence if you think you're enough by yourself.
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PostSubyek: Re: The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire   The Journey : 1st Gate's - Desire Empty2013-12-28, 09:22

TheoAllen wrote:
@vic: Still, you asked for critiques and advices. So that is not entirely their fault. You should remove those sentence if you think you're enough by yourself.
Okay, i remove it..
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