[English] One Piece:Indestructable

Luffy The Rubber Man a young boy whos dream is too become pirate king ever since he was born he got inspired by shanks to become a pirate when he was small now he is on sail to find people join his crew.The Reason Why People Call Him Rubber Man Is Because He Ate A Cursed Devil Fruit That Ables You To Strech In The Cost Of Never being Able To Swim.

Black Leged Sanji Is A Gentleman Sanjis Goal Is To Find The Old Blue And He Is A Very Good Cook His Weakness Is......Women.

Zolo The Bounty Hunter His Goal Is To Beat Mihawk The Shishibukai To Become The Greatest Swordsman Ever.

Nami The Navigator her Goal Is To Make A Map Of The Entire World Nami Loves Money She Is Also A Theif She Steals Money From Evryone Pirates Even The Navy.

Ussop The Liar His Goal Is To Become A Great Warrior And To Be Strong He Is Also The Son Of The Liar Yassop Ussop Is Also A Great Shooter.

Tony Tony Chopper The Reindeer he Also Ate A Devil Fruit The Human Human Fruit It Enables Him To Transdform Into Diffrent Kind Of Forms Like A Giant Monster Reindeer he Is Sometimes A Coward He Is Also A Great Doctor.

Nico Robin Ate The Hana Hana Fruit Power Enableing Her To Bring As Much As Hands As She Wants Her Goal Is To Find Every Single Poneglyph And Read Them.

Franky The Cyborg Franky is strong-willed, slightly crazy, and free-spirited, often with a blatant disregard for rules. He does whatever he wants whenever he wants, though he usually wants little more than to build powerful ships or protect those he cares about

Brook The Skeleton He Ate The Devil Fruit Called Yomi Yomi No Mi Wich Alows Him To Live For Eternity So Basicly he Is Immortal While he looks like and claims to be a gentleman, he possesses very bad manners such as asking to see ladies' panties.

Fire Fist Ace The Son Of The Dead Pirate King Also Step Brother Of Luffy Ace Is Apart From Luffy And Is 2nd Division Commander Of The Whitebeard Pirates He Ate The Devil Fruit Called Mera Mera No Mi Wich Enables Him To Make As Much As Fire As He Wants Ace was much more intelligent, polite, and generally more bearable than Luffy the very few things the brothers shared was their recklessness as pirates (and their near-bottomless stomachs). In addition, Ace liked to party as much as his brother does.

Story Still In Progress I Only Got The Ending And Beggining
Beggining Of Game:Luffy The Main Character Starts Of In A Small Village Luffy Walks Up And Enters A Area Of The Village and Sees A Castle Luffy Wants To Enter The Castle But It Seems That Someone Is Blocking The Door To Inside Of The Castle So Luffy Walks Up TO Him And Talks To Him And Then Says May I Enter The Guy Says No The Guard Sees The Sword That Luffy Has And Says May I Have The Sword If Yes I Will Let You Pass Then Luffy Says Ok here I DOnt need It anyway Then You Can Name The Char That Is Blocking The Door Then he Says I Will Watch Over You While Your In The Castle Luffy And The Guy Goes Upto The Toppest Floor And Then The King Calls Them To Do A Quest.

The Quest Is Finding The Lost Sword Of The King Then They Go On The Search For The Sword And Enters A Cave Where The Sword Is In And They See A Flying Green Creature Having The Sword So Then Luffy And The Guy Beats the Flying Thing Up Then Luffy Asks Him Would You Like To Join My Crew The Guy Says Why Should I uffy Says Because I Think Your Strong And I Need Strong people To Join My Crew Then He Says Some Stuff Then Yes They Return To The Kings Castle And Talks To The King And Says Here Is Your Sword Then Luffy Asks The King Do You Have A Ship We Could Borrow The King Says No But My Freind Can Drop You To the Nearest village Then The Freind Of The King Drops Luffy And The Guy In The Closest Village.

Then Luffy Sees Someone In Front of a dojo The Guy Doesnt Let Him Pass In The Dojo Because Zolo the Bounty Hunter Told Him Too Then Luffy Has To Does A Quest For Him Then He Let Him Enter Luffy beats Some People Up Inside Then Beats The Security Guard Of Zolo Then Luffy Sees Zolo Luffy And The Guy Whatever You Named Him Talks To Zolo And Fights Him Luffy Beats Him And Says Would You Like To Join Me Zolo Says Why Should I I Am A Bounty Hunter If there Was A Bounty on Your Head i Would Have Already killed You And Your Freind Too But If i Join You There Would Be A great Chance I Would Become The Greatest Swordman Etc Etc Then Zolo Body Guard Give Them Ride To A Island.

Zolos Body Guard Dropped Them Of To Ussop The Liar City Luffy And His Crew See A Small House They Go Inside It And There Is A Path To the Backyard Of This Small House And They Also See That There Is Nothing In This House So Then They Walk And Walk There Almost To The Backyard But Then The Some Pirates Surround Him The Pirates of Buggy Luffy Defeats Them All Then Luffy Goes To The Backyard.

And In The Backyard There is Buggy The Captain of The Buggy Pirates And Mohji And Cabaji The Buggy Pirates Want To Kill Ussop So Right At That Moment Luffy And His Crew Interrupt Luffy Make Fun of Buggy And Ussops Nose Then Zolo Said I Will Take On Cabaji And Whatever You Name The Other Guy Is Going To Fight Mohji While Luffy Fights Buggy Luffys Crew Defeats Them And then They Escape And They Forgot To Take One Ship Because They Were In Such Hurry They Forgot That We Had 2 Ships Wich Leaves Luffy One Ship.

He wanted to chase them but then he saw a hole In the ship then Ussop Goes and fixes It and then luffy says would you like to join me Ussops Reply Is sure you can use my help I am The Strongest in this Village then Luffys Says really then lets fight but then Ussop Says im really Injured I cant fight now then Luffy Says Lets chase them but Zolo Says Theres no point there already somewhere far because we had to fix the Ship then they set sail and go to Namis Village.

Luffy and his crew walk a little bit inside the house and theres a man hiding a marine he screams out the name soldiers then marine soldiers come and surround his crew and himself luffy beats them up and goes inside a marine base luffy and his crew goes to the final floor of this marine base and opens a door and there is a woman talking with Captain Morgan then in that same room that the girl Captain Morgan and Luffy and his Crew Don Krieg Interrupts and then they talk about treasure and steals the girl because she knows where the treasure is then luffy wants to go save her but then Captain Morgan says you have to beat me first so on then Luffy beats him and goes and beats Don Krieg too and saves the girl the girl then says my name is Nami they say their names then Nami steals the treasure and Luffy asks do you know any good navigator Nami answer is I am a good navigator then Luffy asks Nami to join his Crew she says yes then they get out of the Island.

They go to the next Island and they see a resturant Luffy and his crew goes inside the resturant a Cook comes Luffy orders something the Cook brings his food and luffy starts eating and his crew right at the minute luffy finished his food Saw Tooth Arlong came inside.

Saw Tooth Arlong ordered his crew to steal all the food the resturant has and treasure then the cook goes and attacks Saw tooth Arlong.

Saw Tooth Arlong defeats him then he walks out and orders his crew to get out of the resturant Luffy walks upto the cook and asks him whats your name he answeres my name is sanji then he sees Nami and flurts with her Luffy says to sanji I will go and beat Arlong for you then Luffy and his Crew walk to the door and sanji says i also want to go to.

They go to Saw Tooth Arlong and fight him and the rest of the crew fight the Crew of Saw Tooth Arlong after they defeated him they take all their treasure back and food and have a big party Luffy asks sanji too join his crew sanji says why luffy says he wants a good cook so sanji says yes then Zeff the owner of the resturant gives half the treasure to Luffy and food too Luffy Then goes with Sanji and his crew to the next island.

Middle I Have Nothing Right Now For The Middle


Ending Of Game:The Mission That Monkey D Dragon Gave Them Luffys Dad Is To Go And Kill The Person Who Posseses The Fruit Of Time Strawhat Crew Ace And Luffy then meet an oracle that eat fruit of time.. then ask to undo.but the world is chaos because someone messing with time.Luffy go to new world and meet the oracle, after that luffy Sees the real boss And Kills Him then the time flow normal Luffy And Ace Goes back To Luffy dad After Their Mission Ace Reads A Newspaper That Says Marco The 1st Divison Commander Of The Whitbeard Pirates Have Been Captured By The Navy

Then Ace Gets Angry And Leavs To Rescue marco With Luffys Crew And Himself Then they Go To The Marine Base And Kill Some Marine Soldiers And Enters The Tempel Of The Marines In The First Floor They See Aokiji And Some Of The Starwhats Stay On First Floor To Try And Beat Ice General Aokiji Second Floor They See Vice Admiral Some Stay There To Try And beat him 3rd Floor Admiral Kizaru The Light General 1 Starwhat Stay There To Try beat Him 4rh Floor Another Vice Admiral Luffy And Ace Beat Him Then Procceds To The Final Floor Floor 5 But Thay Cant Enter The Room Where Marco Is Locked In So They Go In Another Room And FInd key Then They Go In The Room Where Marco Is Locked In And They See Admiral Akainu The Magma General Blocking The Prison Gate Where Marco The Phoenix Is Locked In

Ace And Luffy Fights Akainu But Akainu Was To Strong For Them So He Beats Them But Ace Statches key Off Of Admiral Akainus Pocket Quickly And Frees Marco Then Luffy Says To Ace And Marco Get Out Of Here I Want To Fight Him Alone Then Ace And Marco get Out Of Room Then Akainu And Luffy Fight Akainu beats Him And Sends Him To the Most Dangerous Prison Impel Down Luffy Is Prisoned In LV6 Then It Shows A Quick Scene How Luffy Gets Out Of his Cage

Consider this, it took over 50 volume of manga to tell Mugiwara pirate's growth from beginning until they're noticeably equal with admirals (refer to vol.59 ch.598 "two years later"). 50 volumes are a large number of manga, but worth to tell the viewer every piece of growth. Can you make it the same? Can you tell your viewer how Mugiwara pirates grow in your games until they finally able and strong enough to take down the admirals during the story?

My point is, it's not about how your story begin or end. It's about telling the process, the middle part, the core of your game. You have a good start and again, interesting ending. But the flaws lies in the length of story. In my opinion, you can't (or should i say, not allowed to) make the middle part short or too short, because you'll miss giving the viewer tense from the game itself. You can't make it too long either, since gamers will get bored fast.