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| Subyek: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-01, 20:35 | |
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Fan Game Touhou, untuk yg gk tahu Touhou tu ap, bisa dilihat d sini = Touhou Project
Genre : Danmaku VN RPG Engine : RMVX - Story:
Gensokyo, a fantasy land where many creatures such as youkai, vampire, ghost, and oni are living in harmony with human. But it is dangerous to let a human from real world came to gensokyo. To prevent that, a border created at place which was calle Hakurei Shrine. And a Shrine Maiden's living there has a mission to guard the border and the shrine itself.
And it is identified that Gensokyo's Timeline and Real World were different. Since it was split by a dimension border.
20XX, a time where people become too lazy to do anything and have their life so comfortable that they don't have to work hard anymore. But that doesn't mean everyone in the Real World is a lazy bump.
The story revolves around a one man, a teacher, a weird one that always use his hat and the hat always closed his eyes that almost everyone don't know what his face looks like. Some rumor says that anyone who sees his eyes are said to be dead striked by a storm, but that's just still a rumor, even though it's true that he never take off his hat anywhere and he always sleep by standing and lean on the wall. He is a teacher at some school but liked by many student and teacher despite his appearance, and he also quite famous with some delinquent, since some rumour says that he's able to defeat a yakuza that were trying to disturb a kid.
"That's the only information I can get from, milady" a woman with nine tails, Ran Yakumo, speaking to her master, Yukari Yakumo.
"An intresting man indeed, I've never seen a man so mysterious as him, even his face are so mysterious...."
"Milady, i'm sorry for being rude, but why are you so intrested with this man?"
"Oh Ran, you're so silly, there's no woman that can resist a tempation like this"
"Emm... I still not understand... but that man sure is something, I really want to know more... OH?!"
"See what I mean? Even you were tempted by his mysteriousness, that's why I want to know more about him"
"Then what about sending him here?!" A girl come and disrupt the conversation.
"Chen!? What are you doing here? More importantly, we can't let any Real World dwellers come into this world, the balance will..."
"Aah, that's a good idea, Chen!"
"Milady!? But...."
"It's okay Ran, I'm sure he'll be able to pull it off, no matter how dangerous it is"
The Next Day
Suddenly, she appeared in front of him, Yukari Yakumo, trying to take him with her.
"Shall we go?" ask Yukari with seduced voice.
"Wait a sec'" The man take out a handphone, dialing someone.
"HeadMaster? It's me, Supervisor" It looks like he was a supervisor at his school.
"Ara? what's wrong? It's not usual for you to call me this morning"
"I'm sorry, but it looks like i can't come to school for a long time, a weird person is trying to capture me" he says so calmly while being absorbed into a boundary.
"I can't believed it, even when you're being absorbed slowly like this, you still speak so calmly and call your headmaster to inform something trivial?"
Yukari said so with her surprised face.
"Well you can think anything about me, at least i'm trying not to be fired from my work" The SuperVisor said while smiling.
"You're really intresting, you know? I can't wait to see their reaction when they see you" Yukari smiled with satisfaction.
"Agh dammit, to kidnap me at a time like this..."
"Oh, so you have something you still want to do here?"
"There was a newly open an All-you-can-eat restaurant open near here, I haven't eat anything since yesterday"
Yukari stare blankly at SuperVisor
"Then let's go"
SuperVisor and Yukari disappear along with the Boundary.
Not for long, SuperVisor reappear at mysterious place, where many weird creature appear in front of him.
"Hmm, what's that small winged human...."
Before he finish what he said, suddenly the Fairy shot him
"What the...?!"
SuperVisor trying to confront it, but suddenly "Watch out!!!"
A Talisman strike the fairy at full speed and defeated.
"Are you okay?"
A girl standing there holding a talisman come close to him.
"Oh I tought it was a Miko attacking the... Fairy, I think?"
"It is a fairy! And what do you mean by you tought a miko?!"
"Your clothes do resemble a Miko dress, but you appearently not"
"Well sorry to disappointing you, but I AM A REAL MIKO!"
"A Miko that have her armpit exposed? Even nowadays not everyone like to have her only armpit exposed you know? Except you're..."
The Armpit Miko letting out a Orb that looks like a Yin-Yang and smash at SuperVisor
"Ow hell! that really hurts!"
"Well serve you right! It makes me feel regretful for helping you!"
"Oh...!" The Man stand up and bow "Sorry I forgot, thank you very much for helping me"
"Well it's okay if you understand, so where do you live?"
"Emm... about that...." SuperVisor explain everything.
"THAT YUKARI!!!!! SHE'S GOING TO PAY FOR THIS!!!" The Armpit Miko is all rage.
"Yukari?"
"Yep, she was an awful youkai who likes to do anything whenever she wants to!"
"so you mean I'm her victim?"
"More or less, by the way, it's dangerous if you're staying here as a Real World Human, let's go to my Shrine, it's safe there and maybe you can find her there."
"Guess I've no choice."
"So, what's your name?"
"My name? I think it's not that important so you can just call me SuperVisor"
"What a weird name, by the way i'm..."
"An Armpit Miko?"
"I HAVE A NAME TOO YOU KNOW! REIMU HAKUREI!! THE SHRINE MAIDEN OF HAKUREI SHRINE!!!"
"Aah, okay I understand, Armpit Miko Reimu" SuperVisor says so while smirking.
"Grr! You're really annoying!"
"You can think anything about me, but I'm still me"
"And confusing"
And so begin the adventure of a mysterious man on a mysterious world called Gensokyo. What will he encounter? What will he do to get back to his own world?
And will all of his mystery reveal in this world?
Fitur : 1. Tankentai IAB (Improved Animated Battler) Custom Ruthless Version (Full animated battle) 2. VN (Visual Novel) like Travelling, Scenario choose by your own. 3. Single Party Change, almost like pokemon, when the first member died, your next party appear again. (Mixed with KGC Large Party for more that 10 party member) 4. No attack command, meaning that everything here use skill (Spell Card in touhou) 5. Spell Break System (Touhou Original System which cancel their skill/spell card when their health's down to zero) almost same as the Original Spell Break System. (Maybe more to add) Credit : ZUN Tasofro Alphes wltr3565 Rusty milanorid rickicker Tankentai KGC Yuuto Mithran Woratana Moon LittleDude777 Syvkal SojaBird jfjohny5 ERZENGEL Jet19085 OverLord_Dave ScreenShot dan demo blom ada dikarenakan sprite dan CG ny blom jadi sepenuhny Some Wallpaper
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-01, 21:22 | |
| sumpah ngakak baca prolognya. really waiting for this game! satu hal: evade nya manual (semacem Forced evasion) apa by luck? dan apa di tengah pertarungan bisa change chara? (Armpit Miko?? !!!!!) | |
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-01, 21:25 | |
| Akhirnya Hmm sayang blm banyak yg bisa komen selain dialognya yg rada koplak. Kalo soal nama SuperVisor agak aneh juga ya, gimana kalo panggilannya Teach (kan guru) Di tunggu update berikutnya | |
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-01, 21:35 | |
| PARAH KEREN BANGET PARAH KOCAK AMAT? Gwa seneng banget tu ama tokoh cool/kocak kaya gitu (Hello principal? Sorry, I'm being kidnapped so I can't go to school now ) Touhou ya, cuma pernah denger ga perna maen . Soalnya banyak banget si seriesnya - Spoiler:
Gwa tau touhou cuma dari H (if you know what I mean )
Di touhou gwa seneng yang cewe (smua cewe ding ya?) rambut pendek sebahu make pedang, yang setengah hantu setengah orang, dan suka bersih2 kalo ga salah . | |
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-01, 21:48 | |
| wah baru beberapa menit udah ada yg komen @milan agak susah kalo manual evade, jadi ntar wa seh tergantungin luck, tpi emang rencanany darah karakter ny kecil2 + hit rate kecilsama evasion tinggi jadi mungkin bisa dibilang istilah Graze dan karena battle ny Turn Based VX Default, jadi tiap turn bisa ko' ganti chara dan urutanny juga bisa diganti kyk KGC large Party @Rust sori banget, soalny bkin sprite dari 0 tu ternyata cukup ribet jadi mungkin demony masih agak lama @Nisa hoho, klo gitu maen game wa yg ini aj, ntar semua ceritany wa compile & compress biar ngerti ato ... - Quote :
- Di touhou gwa seneng yang cewe (smua cewe ding ya?) rambut pendek sebahu make pedang, yang setengah hantu setengah orang, dan suka bersih2 kalo ga salah .
namany Youmu Konpaku maen aj TH 7, ntar ketemu ko' d stage 5 | |
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-01, 23:18 | |
| Wew, iya ya, kalo ga sala jadi boss y? Pingin jadi playable char. (OOT ) Btw, itu bukan? yg di kanan bawah sig kk Ok deh, ditunggu game-nya!! (awalnya gwa uda curiga ngeliat karakter cowo di sig kk, g prna denger ada cowo di touhou soalny. ternyata karakter ori toh ) | |
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-02, 12:33 | |
| @nisa playable ko' di TH 8 ama 9 yeps, yg itu btw... - Quote :
(awalnya gwa uda curiga ngeliat karakter cowo di sig kk, g prna denger ada cowo di touhou soalny. ternyata karakter ori toh ) tapi ntar laki2 yg ada di touhou mao wa masukin ko' | |
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| Subyek: Re: Touhou Mis - Calculative Border 2010-10-11, 20:04 | |
| - NightRider wrote:
- @nisa
playable ko' di TH 8 ama 9
yeps, yg itu
@nr: jangan lupa di TH 7.5 dan 10.5 youmu bisa digunain Manteb nih, fangame Touhou yang rada jarang Kuperbaikin penulisan prolognya ya KEEP GOING ON! EDIT: Nih perbaikan prolognya - Spoiler:
Gensokyo. It is somewhere unknown by the outer world, where youkais and other illusionary beings keeping their existence, and live together with humans.
It is very dangerous to let outer world humans to enter Gensokyo. That is Hakurei shrine's eternal mission; to keep Hakurei Border on, and let no one to get out from Gensokyo. Once you enter there, there is no escape. Your only choice is to live there.
And it is known that Gensokyo's and the outer world's timeline has different flows. Gensokyo residents tends to get older slower than outer world residents.
Now is 20XX. We're in the era where life is so comfortable with a pretty small effort. A very hard work is required no more. They can enjoy the "paradise" in laziness. At least it's for the outer worlders.
I'm getting concerned with milady's plans. What is happening to her? She's been spying on someone, no, not from Gensokyo, but an outer worlder. Almost everyday she stares at this guy. For me, he's just an ordinary man, not. He's wearing his cap that could mask his eyes from the others' view, and more, he's a teacher. He's more like a student. They said that anyone who saw his eyes will be dead stroked by a lighting. But I bet it's just a rumor. It is true that he never takes off his hat, anywhere. Stand sleeping while leaning on the wall seems to be one of his hobbies. I overheard that he is known of his delinquency, and capable of finishing a yakuza that were trying to disturb a kid.
"That is the only information that I can get so far, milady."
"Wonderful job, Ran. I feel that my interest in this man is growing stronger."
"Milady, if I can ask you, why are you interested with this guy?"
"Oh Ran, you're so silly, there's no woman that can resist a tempation like this"
"Emm... I still don't understand... but I do agree, he is something. I'm getting curious... Oh?!"
My brain is like being shocked. Now I understood completely, Yukari-sama's intention... I felt something special from that man.
"See? You do got tempted of him, do you? I wanna know more about him!"
"Then what about sending him here?"
"Ch, Chen?! Why are you here?!"
Chen... She just came out of nowhere. Not only that, she suggested something very risky too, though it is not impossible for Yukari-sama. Everyone knows her power, ability to control borders. With that, she can do almost everything.
"Aah, that's a good idea, Chen!"
"Milady?! No, it's very risky! What if he does something dangerous or got his hitbox, I mean got killed in a danmaku fight?!"
"You worry too much, Ran. I know he is not that evil or that weak. Let just see. It must be entertaining!"
"Yay! New guy!"
"Mi, milady..."
I don't care anymore. Thanks too Chen, this man is in danger now, or vice versa, we ARE in danger... To live in Gensokyo, a very good evasion and reading of bullet patterns is required, plus, have an ability at least to shoot some barrage of bullets. I have a bad feeling...
~
Ah, ah nice, cozy day. Walking in the streets of this city isn't that bad compared to walking in Gensokyo. The city maybe full of crowds, but it's better than grazing and endanger my hitbox on million of bullets like usual. Even more, this district seems to care about fashion, so this outfit isn't that flashy compared to the others.
In my way, I found several Touhou fans. Touhou? It's a book based on Gensokyo that Akyu wrote and I publish it in the outer world. Everyone in the outer world seems to like it! But they still think it's only a fantasy. To think about it, it's an irony. At least Gensokyo whereabouts doesn't have much prove and it's still safe.
Oh, there he is! The mysterious man. He's about to fall in the sewers. This is my chance; As he come out, it's my time to wrap him inside the boundaries. This is the best chance. Oh, I'm so marvelous!
Since he already got captured, now I have to give him my greetings. Inside the gaps, of course.
"Oh, good morning! Or should I say, good afternoon."
"Afternoon? You can say so, it's pretty dark in here. Wait, noon already? And where am I?"
His expression does not change much. People would have their face covered in fear as they enter here. He is special indeed. My excitement grows stronger.
"You're impolite, aren't you? I'm letting your wish to become true."
"My wish? Do I?"
"Yes, your wish, to live in a world of fantasy."
"... It's every people's common wish."
He does say the right thing. Everyone must be wishing to live in a world of fantasy, in the outer world. It's a different case in Gensokyo though. I can't tell what does he want.
"Wait a sec..."
Now he began to shuffle around his pocket, and bring out a shikigami of the outer world. Outer world shikigamis' obedience are far better than Gensokyo. I still prefer Ran and Chen though.
"HeadMaster? It's me, Supervisor"
"Huh? How unusual to call me this morning..."
"I apologize, but looks like that I'll be absent for a long time. I got kidnapped by someone."
Then he end up the conversation fast. He started to be aware of this.
"I can't belive this, you're in somewhere unknown like this, and you still talk like nothing special happened?"
"Well you can think anything about me, at least I'm trying not to be fired from my job."
"You're really something, you know? I can't wait to see their reactions when they see you."
"Damn, to kidnap me at a time like this..."
"Oh, you still have something to do there? The "Real World" I mean."
"There was a newly open an All-you-can-eat restaurant open near here, I haven't eat anything since yesterday"
I can't stop staring at him. Now my lust is turning to curiosity. I do not love this guy, I want to reveal this man's identity, little by little. This gonna be fun.
"Then, have a nice stay! My name's Yukari, Yakumo Yukari."
"Whoa!"
Time to send him to Gensokyo for real! Now let's see what will he do in there, with bullets barraging in more than 720 ways...
~
My intuition calls me. It says that I must go there. I just want to drink my ocha peacefully on the veranda, but this bugs me too much. I have no choice but to follow it. What will happen, by the way?
"Hmm? A winged girl?"
Oh, a man with a blue hat is about to be attacked by a fairy! I must save him fast!
"What the...?!"
"Watch out!"
I shouted as I try to warn him. I shot my talisman at the fairy and it got defeated easily. A very low class fairy, I believe.
"Are you okay?"
This man... He wears an unusual set of fabrics. A white shirt with blue long trousers, with a hat blocking my view from his eyes. Annoying. I'm getting interested how is his face like. But my intuition said that I should not disturb his hat, so I let it be.
"Oh, I thought it was a Shrine Priest that attacked the... Fairy, I think?"
"It IS a fairy! And what do you mean by you thought a Shrine Priest?! Like I'm not one!"
"Your outfit does resemble a shrine maiden, but looks like not a shrine maiden as well."
"Well, sorry to disappoint you, but I AM A SHRINE MAIDEN!"
"A shrine maiden, letting her armpit exposed? It's normal without detached sleeves, except you do have the sleeves. Are you..."
Argh, this guy is making me mad! How annoying! I just helped him and he just insulted me?! He deserves his hitbox to be hit with my Yin Yang Orb! What's the matter with some detached sleeves anyway?
"Ow hell! That really hurts!"
"Serves you right! It's like helping you is completely worthless!"
"Oh... I forgot. Thank you very much for helping me."
Now he has thanked me. At least he has manners. What makes me curious is why he's here. He must be an outer worlder. None in Gensokyo would wear this kind of outfit, except it resembles that moon rabbit youkai's outfit.
"Great that you understand. So, why are you here again?"
"Emm... about that..."
He explained everything. From his fall, his encounter with Yukari, and was dropped here until I found him. That goddammned Yukari! She's making a ruckus again!
"THAT DAMN YUKARI AGAIN! SHE GONNA PAY FOR THIS!!!"
I can't help but getting angry! Why not? She's making trouble again. Now by sending an outer worlder here! She does know that Gensokyo is dangerous without good evasion skills, right? So why am I guarding the Hakurei Border if an outer worlder can enter here?
"Yukari?"
"Yep, she's an awful youkai who trolls anywhere she want!"
"So you can say that I'm this Yukari's victim..."
"More or less. By the way, it's dangerous if you still staying here, since you're an outer worlder. Let's go to my shrine, it's probably safe there and maybe she's there already."
"Guess I have no choice."
"Now, follow me."
Better for me to guide him to the shrine. He might give a donation or two. And about this guy... I feel something special about him. It's more than interest. He has a special aura from him. I better ask his name.
"Say, what's you name?"
"Do you ask my name?"
"Of course, the name's Reimu, Hakurei Reimu. Now, tell me yours!"
"Well then. My name is..."
Then what will happen next to this guy? For sure, he will encounter a lots of thrills, more than I can handle alone. My interest is getting stronger.
Kuubah perspektif penulisannya jadi pandangan orang pertama, biar ngekhas penulisan ZUN juga Grammar dan fakta tentang Gensokyo juga kuperbaikin. Dan ada sedikit perubahan Gimana? | |
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